23.9.05

Poem: Daydreaming on the Bus

A glance turns into life
Under an autumn leaf of thought

I sit on the second seat from the back of the bus
Sipping on earth’s energy
For I know today’s lecture is becoming of an A

But her look turns focus into
A day dream; I imagine

Her left arm aches from the pains
Of late night arguments with her journal;
They torture her relationships into resolve

She creates poetry in her dress
And undresses me with her lap laden with readings

She carries hope in her back pocket and
Charisma in her speech;
We spend the night together talking

After a rainy afternoon of indoor adventures
I tell her she is beautiful

She has heard such talk many a time by suitors of all
Intentions, but never actually heard it;
I repeat, “you are beautiful”

I argue for the sake of principle
But realize that it is for not; I am in love


Looking at my wife under the bus' ceiling of chance,
I come to and venture a glance of my own,
Hoping to start a fairytale if only for the right word

I manage a hesitant bout of silence
And go to class. Not even Hello.

Maybe next time?

17.9.05

Life: Marx and Rousseau

I feel almost naked in posting this. I have never before shared a real turned-in paper from school. This one originates from a political theory class. For lack of a better phrase, I stumbled upon it while cleaning up hard drive space in my computer. The essay circumvents issues of religion, power, and government by comparing Marx and Rousseau and will therefore serve as an appropriate catalyst for future writings concerning the origins of man and society. But in itself, the essay offers understandable summaries of some of Rousseau’s and Marx’s most interesting (and famous) thoughts. Enjoy…

From the Ground Up

There are inevitably changes in society, sometimes these changes overlap, sometimes they are abrupt and independent of one another, and some changes are at an ambiguous point in between the two extremes. But why in fact are there changes in society and to what cause do they offer their thanks? Are these changes inevitable or a cause of some unnatural development of man? And arguably most importantly, is the present state of society changeable? These seemingly unanswerable questions are precisely what motivate Marx and Rousseau to carry out their intellectual quest to find the past, present, and future state of man. Rousseau and Marx at surface level have largely different views on how society evolves, but with more careful consideration of Marx’s argument concerning capitalism and Rousseau’s views about the origination of inequality, striking similarities concerning their opinions on the future of man will show themselves.

Firstly, Rousseau’s Origin’s of Inequality will be discussed, specifically, his opinions about the evolution of society to its present state and how this present state is unnatural and needs be changed. Secondly, Marx’s views about capitalism will be used to further understand his theory of societal evolution. The two will then be compared by, 1) recognizing their different views about the cause of societal change, and some similarities, and 2) finding similarities in their conclusions. Lastly, Rousseau’s Social Contract will be shown to be in agreement with Marx.

Rousseau’s idea about the development of society and inevitably, government and law, could be arranged many different ways, and it is not necessary to strictly define the “levels” or stages for this discussion. Therefore, a simple understanding of the evolution from the very animalistic man to the complex nature of him will be sufficient.
“I see an animal less strong than some, less agile than others, but all in all, the most advantageously organized of all,” says Rousseau. This is a key note; Rousseau believes whole heartedly that man was at his best when he was at the very beginning of his development. This state is the most natural, and any following development therefore, went “against nature.” In this beginning, Rousseau says that people have certain basic functions: perceiving, feeling, willing, desiring, fearing, and pitying” People do not have language per-say. They have no need for social relations. At the simplest sense, they have basic desires and whether instinctual or through cognitive thought, they fulfill those desires, such as eating, sleeping, and procreating. They are the closest form to a contemporary definition of a savage.

Eventually though, humans start to accumulate desire satisfying commodities like food. Because they have this new idea of a “possession” they start to have a need to protect those possessions and means to satisfy their desires more efficiently. As is stated in the Discourse, “difficulties soon presented themselves to him (man); it was necessary to learn to overcome them.”

Eventually, to overcome many of these difficulties, men found it necessary, in some instances, to come together; “He united with them in a herd, or at most in some sort of free association, that obligated no one and that lasted only as long as the passing need that had formed it.” This bonding together to help each man individually, eventually was seen as more and more useful and thus, happened more often. As time progressed and men coming together for common interests became frequent, language evolved, and primitive forms of technology, or in the least sense, cooperation, were created. “These first advances enabled man to make more rapid ones. The more the mind was enlightened, the more industry was perfected.”

Again, with time, these bonds grew stronger and the sense of community grew more distinct, and most importantly, organization was created. Some people would say, fish, and others would build shelter. Soon then, because certain people’s “jobs” were seen as more important or more skillful, there became some sense of “esteem” or a simplistic level of hierarchy if you will. For example, Rousseau writes, “…each man punished the contempt shown him in a manner proportionate to the esteem in which he held himself; acts of revenge became terrible and men became bloodthirsty and cruel.” Now this new sense of revenge, and terrible acts, gives way for fear. Because of this fear, there are laws set forth.

So now it is fairly easy to see how this new form of interaction led itself to our modern state of affairs. Certain men had more power in these hierarchy’s then others, and for this very reason, men (and woman of course, but for clarity “men” will be assumed to include woman) put themselves underneath under men for possible gains, such as food and protection. But these “protectors” and “providers” soon became seduced by power and wealth. People surrendered to fraudulent contracts that did not benefit them proportionally to the benefit gained by the man in power. In earnest, it was/is a sorry state of affairs.

Marx, as was previously mentioned, on the surface, creates a much different picture of man’s development. For now, I will paint that picture as its basic level. Every modern view of society and politics is a result of economics. Marx puts it this way when critiquing political economy, “It expresses abstract formulae the material process through which private property actually passes, and these formulae it then takes for laws. It does not comprehend these laws—i.e., it does not demonstrate how they arise from the very nature of private property.” His end result is then, that all laws are formed because of private property. The questions are, who has what, how much do they have, and how can they keep it?

These fundamentals bind human development into differing governments and different economic forms. For example, at the very beginning, people did not “own” anything, they merely lived. But as possessions grew, so did power. The person with the most possessions had the most power, and set up institutions that would justify his or her having more than everyone else. Then, as possessions change hands, ideas are changed resultantly.

So, as soon as possessions became important, and the already discussed capitalistic state was created as a result, a democracy, in one sense or the other, fits. How can there be a dictatorship and capitalism, there would be too many complications for it to be feasible. For example, if the dictator decided that a certain person shouldn’t have as much as he does, then the institution set up by the dictatorship would ensure the end result being, the person won’t have as much. This is contradictory to the very nature of capitalism: that each man, through trade and property, can have as much as he can produce (buy). In basic, because capitalism arises, democracy, naturally arises. This is consistent with Marx’s basic idea that the economic system, changes the ideas of the people, and ultimately, the governmental system. It could be inferred that Marx’s ultimate goal would be a perfect communist state, because that would parallel (fit with) a more fair and equal economic state, where humans are not objectified or alienated, they all create equally and consume equally.

As was previously mentioned, then, at the basic level, it seems as though Rousseau’s idea about the development of society is based on natural inevitabilities, or more specifically, man’s wants and needs growing. Marx then, says society changes as a result of economic changes, or more specifically, how possessions (power) change hands. But if Rousseau’s theory of development is more strictly scrutinized, it will become apparent that many of the evolutions which caused societal changes, in Rousseau’s eyes, were the result of possession changes. This new thought, will then lend itself to make Rousseau’s original “natural” evolution to look quite similar to Marx’s economic development.
From the very first stage of human nature, the savage like state, Rousseau describes the change as follows, “The first person who, having enclosed a plot of land, took it into his head to say this is mine and found people simple enough to believe him, was the true founder of civil society.” This is much the same as Marx’s theory about capitalism. That once capitalism began, humans become objects of a society, rather than individuals (became part of a pack instead of an individual savage). So the very start of the change from savage to group was made based on possession (plot of land). Then, because in this previously discussed time when man was coming together, “since the strongest were probably first to make themselves lodgings they felt capable of defending presumably the weak found it quicker and safer to imitate then to try and dislodge them.” Then, after these hierarchies were set up, Rousseau writes

“It was to use in his favor the very strength of those who attacked him to turn his adversaries into his defenders…let us institute rules of justice and peace to which all will be obliged to conform, which will make special exceptions for no one.”

As it is clear to see, because certain people had more or less possessions, they had esteem or power in these communities, then, because they found it better to have the lesser people on their side, they created this fraudulent contracts, where it would seem that everyone was equal, or at least had the possibility of becoming equal (capitalism), whereby they would gain even more power and control. This is exactly reminiscent of Marx’s view that the original possessors created rules (and religions) just to help themselves maintain their power. Rousseau doesn’t base development on economies, but, he does base it on needs, and what are needs if not possessions? The similarities are intrinsic.

11.9.05

Life: Dealing with Demons

I’m about to write personally and candidly, because honestly, a part of me doesn’t enjoy my own words. It is as if the moment that I step out of my journal I see my world becoming a civil union between unintended lies and outstretched hands crying for the truth.

The truth?

The truth is I’m searching for words to defy the norm when all I really want to do is put all this ambiguous rhetoric aside and let this turn into me being direct with you. But these deceptions become overwhelming and they inevitably poor themselves into my otherwise honest words even without my permission. Understand this, a common misconception is that you are either an activist or you are not, you either stand up for justice or you bite your tongue, you are either confident or shy.

Because when I look into the mirror I don’t see one or the other. Do you?

I understand this, I understand my voice, I understand freedom, I even understand truth, but I don’t understand how I can contort some abstract concept into words on a page but I can’t tell my father that I love him, I don’t understand how right now, I can speak my mind—but when a pretty girl sits next to me on the bus, I am speechless. I don’t understand how this feels so right yet speaking up for what is right is so hard without the help of an intent audience.

And isn’t that wrong? Isn’t there some intrinsic hypocrisy in caring so deeply about what to say and how to say it but not understanding when to say it?

So if you can relate, contemplate this scenario. I feel like I’ve created some imaginary line between idealism and college monotony where change isn’t required on the weekends and the picket lines are just another barrier to my desired ends.

Consistency is the key.

So there is a fine line between truth, fear, and hesitation—but my real fear is that even after this clarity, I’ll still hesitate to talk to that pretty girl on the bus, I’ll still swallow hard without letting my feelings show, and I’ll still be silent when the audience goes. But this is life, and this is the truth.

Speak your mind, because if you do…you might just change one.

5.9.05

Poem: Conversation with the Insecure

Calculate the distance between mahogany treasures
and transfixed senses.
Therein lye a caricature of frustration; look at me.

Manors are within your reach;
make your mother proud.
Let our eyes collide for the sake of understanding.

But don’t smile, because I’m not funny.

2.9.05

Life: Stop the Hate


I was casually flipping through a U.S. News and World Report, skimming the latest collegiate rankings. I was honestly perplexed. The beloved Ohio State was ranked in very few categories, if nothing else; I shed a tear out of pity.


I then thought, well this could be fun, why don’t I try and find a field where Ohio State is better than Michigan. After much careful searching, I found two. One being the school of veterinary because Michigan doesn’t have one and the other being vocational education because Michigan doesn’t care about it.

In a word: Pathetic.

Ohio State, you have great sports teams and could make a logical argument for OSU’s even being better than UM’s. You would ultimately fail in such an argument but still, it would be worth a discussion.

But honestly, let’s stop all the hate people. Just put everything together: academics, sports, and the campus. Everyone, both Michigan and Ohio State students alike, we should all hold hands in the name of friendship, cut out all the bickering, and unanimously agree that Michigan is a better school. It would make things much easier.

And to show my sincerity I will lead us all in a uniting song of faith…



Hail to the victors valiant
Hail to the conquering heroes
Hail, Hail, to Michigan
The leaders and best!